Lang/Lit people, here are a couple of section A ELLA1 responses. I’ve commented on the first in speech, and put written comments on the second (though the drawn lines work a bit weirdly there, as they all appear at once – you have to look for the one being drawn as each comment starts to see which bit of the essay I’m referring to). Please add your own comments or questions, too – don’t be shy! It will really get you doing some focussed thinking that will help prepare your mind for tomorrow’s exam.
I have also received a timed response to a Kite Runner essay, which is here, with my comments: